The first story this week in
Trembling With Fear
is
A Rain-Faded Photograph by DJ Tyrer. The opening paragraph is a good
example of showing and not telling, capturing the mood and atmosphere
perfectly. Even before you get to the explicit statement about taking a
life, you already know this is what’s happened. This well-crafted story
continues in the same vein, painting feelings, pulling you inexorably
along to the end.
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